However, if this is YA, then I assume the protagonist is a teenager, and I have trouble buying into a teen speaking with such rigid pomposity.ReplyDeleteJaneApril 22, 2010 at 6:05 PMI am really interested in this, but the formality of it matters not kind of threw me.ReplyDeleteAmanda the AspiringApril 22, 2010 at 7:55 PMI agree with Steve's nit, and But it matters not is jarringly formal, but