P), I would love if you would take a look at it and let me know what you think!Please remember that it is only a first draft, so I know there are a lot of things which need work; but other than that, tell me anything that comes to mind!At the moment, you can read the first draft of Raven here:figment . com/books/363081-Raven(remove spaces and put all on one line - if it does not work, there is a link on my